He wished, He could stop tears from her numb eye, Only if she doesn't cry, He'd even prefer to die, Bearing whom in mind, she feels shy, Waving his palms on her beautiful hair, He wished he could reach there, With her pale eye, She was wishing him final goodbye,
He wants to be the guy,
Only then he realized,
He wished he could die.
He wished..
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Aww man.
Girls rule.
lol
I feel like I am 10 =D
Thats the story of approximately 25 billion guys in this country! Lol
@ roohani: It's just a feeling on third preson perspective.. not my love story
@anushay: That girl is gonna die, and you're feeling happy about it..
I meant 'final goodbye'..
Hmm. There's nothing like dictating a tragedy within a few words.
The fewer the words, the more the impact.
Keep writing, my friend. :)
DAMN.... :-0
you... :-0
ARE... 8-|
writing cool poems ....! :-|
Like that.. keep rocking D&G
Thanks anamika..
and thanks to you too shafi.. It's the first ever poem I wrote..
thank you..
and By the way what's 'D&G', I'm sorry.. I'm dumb at short terms..
OH OH OH!
No, this sucks.=|
I mean, you wrote it well, I totally got a different meaning!
A single finally thinking about some girl. I guess some thing went wrong
That's touched the chords in my heart (:
sweet little poem...
simple & direct...
a nice write...
:)
whoa! heartache rules! it means you've experiences something very special and still came out a single man.
good for you.
keep cultivating heartaches! :-)
..
.ero
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